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56. Danger Ahead by !unimaginatarium:iconunimaginatarium:

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Submitted: January 23
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Danger ahead~
Watch out for these ones boys (and likeminded girls), they're nothing but trouble.
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*Somnambulist-theory:iconSomnambulist-theory: Jan 23, 2008, 6:59:22 PM
Are you still looking for crit, or would you should me for it?

I love it, by the way.

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When I think of something witty to say, I'll let you know.
!unimaginatarium:iconunimaginatarium: Jan 23, 2008, 7:16:32 PM
Crit, yes plz. ^^
Thank you.
*Somnambulist-theory:iconSomnambulist-theory: Jan 23, 2008, 7:29:53 PM
Well, the right side of her neck (her left hand side) should curve in a little more, instead of going almost straight down. You might also want to consider thinning it ever so slightly.
Also >_<
Her torso seems turned too far to her right, and looks slightly uncomfortable.

I might be wrong, I am in no way an expert. So, feel free to slap me and/or ignore my suggestions.

Other than that, I love it. <3

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When I think of something witty to say, I'll let you know.
!unimaginatarium:iconunimaginatarium: Jan 23, 2008, 8:00:00 PM
I definately see what you're saying in regards to the neck, and since this was drawn in an anime style, I agree with you.

I was trying to give the impression that she was turning around to face someone with the torso contortion, but I think I didn't pull it off so great. xD

Thanks a bunch, Lily-Billy.
=hotaru-sama666:iconhotaru-sama666: Jan 23, 2008, 8:02:36 PM
Let's see, I don't think anything is wrong the the right side of her neck, but the left side (her right side) seems a little thick to me as well as a bit short. Also, her right eye looks slightly low than the other (though that could just be the angle of her head), and the upper part of her left (our right) arm looks a little...odd for some reason. It also looks like it should be...pushed back a little? :o

other then this it's a really great picture. I love the 'smoking skull' and you did a lovely job on her hands. They look so delicately placed. :)

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"Du kannst, Du willst und wirst nie vergeben
und Du verteufelst sein ganzes Leben
treibst in den Wahnsinn von
maßlosem Zorn, Vernichtung und Rache,
Du bist zum Hassen gebor'n!"
!unimaginatarium:iconunimaginatarium: Jan 23, 2008, 8:09:05 PM
Ahh, I see what you mean with the eye. My own fault, she was intended to be looking straight ahead. xD
Not quite sure exactly where the arm should be, but yeah, I can see that there is a problem. :/

Thanks, though! <3
~serekuro:iconserekuro: Jan 23, 2008, 8:40:37 PM
This is lovely. I love how you colored it 8] The proportions are looking very nice.

I especially like the skull smokee thingy~~

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Moving
I am moving closer to your side
Luring
You are luring me into the night
Crying
Who is crying for you here
Dying
I am dying fast inside your tears
!unimaginatarium:iconunimaginatarium: Jan 23, 2008, 8:45:42 PM
Thank you. As commenters before you have pointed out, things aren't perfect, but getting there.
*Somnambulist-theory:iconSomnambulist-theory: Jan 23, 2008, 9:11:54 PM
X3 I gotcha.
I understood that she was turning, don't worry. <3
Sorry if I offended you.

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When I think of something witty to say, I'll let you know.
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